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Death and Absolution by Azurite

Rated: M • 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar Past Featured Story
Summary: The past returns to haunt those present in Noah's virtual world. One person will not walk away from this encounter. Will that person be able to learn the truth of the world left behind, and the second chance ahead?
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Date: 06/17/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Second Chances

Oh...my...GOSH!!!  And you're NOT continuing this story?!  Hey, what's up with that?

 Okay, so you totally ended it on a cliffhanger (just so that you know).  But that was really good--and original.  I loved the way you opened up the story.  Téa was presented well.  I mean it.  Sometimes, people will have Téa (Anzu) as a complete airhead.  I like how you made her somewhat intelligent. 

 Kaiba was another good character presented in here.  In the beginning, I'm thinking he's believing she's some stupid girl, trying to save them.  But when it came to seeing her dead body, I was amazed how you brought his feelings into the scene.  At the graveyard, I kept my eyes glued to the computer screen b/c it was so good.  I love Seto's angst there. You described it well.

 Usually, in Kaiba/Téa stories, the friends are no brought into it.  I was so happy to see Joey, Serinity, Duke, Tristan and Yugi in here.  You explained their feelings very good and I loved how you brought them in there, even though the story is mainly centered on Kaiba and Téa. 

 Yugi's feelings--from the beginning of just mentioning him--was awesome.  I love how he was willing to cut his skin from the bonds to find Téa and save her.  I almost criedwhen he said he loved her at the grave stone.

 The whole theme is awesome.  When you read stories about angels, you don't expect what you put in there.  I didn't expect her to be seen only in a reflection.  I applaud you on that.  And how Seto could only feel her when he passes through her.  That was very good.  And again, the story was awesome in itself.  I love the ending as well.  (I'm in love with Tristan, so that's why I say that *winks*)  Anyway, that was very original and enjoyable. 

 So, please continue.  And, I hope you do that soon.

As I Please by Geniusgirl

Rated: M • 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Anzu Mazaki deals with a drunk Seto Kaiba on the night of Mokuba's wedding reception. What could possibly go wrong?
Reviewer: darkmistress in the shadows Signed
Date: 06/16/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Why don't you continue this?  It's very well done.