liked the bit about the cat so cute
That had an interesting finish. I'll give it a 9.99... one tiny decimal of a point and you would have gotten a perfect 10. I loved the story and I am sorrt of sad that it's only a one-shot but hey at least you wrote something good
In this you put Obelisk Blue as second-class, it's not. It is Kaiba's school so Ra Yellow is second-class. Obelisk = Kaiba, Ra = Marik, Osiris = Yugi. But besides that, it's okay.
Author's Response: Really? Because all the research I did on GX indicated that Obelisk Blue was over Osiris Red, but below Ra Yellow. All I know for sure is that Osiris Red is at the bottom of the barrel.